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Jun 2016
Verse 1
Patience
why do I need patience
buying time don't make sense
frequently

Oh, yes
time don't cost two cents
when you're just a child just
wait and see

Chorus
Ooooo,
Can't hit rock bottom
now
can't hit rock bottom
with these wings
can I?
Noooo,
Caught me some rainbows
now
I'm going to paint myself
Saturn's rings.

Verse 2
Colors of my innocence,
raining down upon me
I don't know what
hopeless means.
Happiness does make sense
filling up my lonely
Nothing will prevent
my dreams.

Chorus*
Ooooo,
Can't hit rock bottom
now
can't hit rock bottom
with these wings
can I?
Noooo,
Caught me some rainbows
now
I'm going to paint myself
Saturn's rings.
I got into a phase of writing country/folk sounding lyrics and poetry last year (summer).
It was very quick, but I enjoyed it immensely.

I abandoned this; I guess I was feeling funky.
So I just repeated the chorus (copy/paste) and I'm, otherwise, leaving it as is.
Don't want to ruin the tone of the song now, right?

I have to admit to myself, it is kind of beautiful. What do you think? :)
Darren Edsel Wilson
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Darren Edsel Wilson  33/M/Philadelphia
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