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Not Lauren
Poems
Apr 2015
Finding "You"
The bones beneath my skin are burning and oh God, I can no longer tell if it's from the hate I have for me or for
"you"
Is this you?
There's seven days worth of apologies but I don't think
"you"
deserve to hear a breath of them
Is
this
you?
I'd walk barefoot to
"you"
even if
"you"
are the one who put broken glass in my path
Is
THIS
you?
People are just definitions that are still being written so be careful how
"you"
finish yours
TELL ME, IS
THIS
YOU?
"You"
are one of those poems that took so long to find something to write about & once I did, it made me wonder why I wasn't able to write you sooner
THIS IS YOU... RIGHT?
So tell me...
Who's the
"you"
that
YOU
speak of?
Please give me feedback! I'd like opinions before I submit this for my school's anonymous poetry contest.
#love
#poem
#poetry
#broken
#life
#dark
#people
#failure
#new
#question
Written by
Not Lauren
23/F/MN
(23/F/MN)
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