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Trials & Constellations

If you're the moon with your phases

Then I'm a star gazer, mesmerised by the view..

And if your 'ring of Saturn' falls out I'd go up there myself and find one more suited for you

 

And how does it feel to have a face that so many call home?..

Cause for three sleepless nights, this 'homeless girl' gave up everything just to write you a poem..

 

Oh I've been struggling,

 

I've been staring at the page for ages,

Trying to find the most honest way to say this..

See every time you touch my heart I feel it breaking

So I will never let you know..

But you are so beautiful, I can't take it

 

And no I won't stop believing

That everyone comes into your life for some kind of reason..

But I'm not using you to write, I'm using you as a source for breathing

though every time I see you I fall to pieces..

..But every piece is in awe with you

So would you collect them and adore me too?

 

Oh I just can't describe this..

If there was a metaphor you know I'd write it..

You make me lost for words but I won't stop trying,

In hope of finding new parts of you,

Oh you are so beautiful, I don't like it

 

Cause it ties knots in my stomach.

And then my heart beat drains out the city but I can't stop it..

Is this a horrible poem cause I'm just being honest..

And though adrenaline is supposed to keep me going,

Oh you are so beautiful I can't focus

 

So don't get too close for comfort

Cause I love you so much my heart hurts,

And it's a pain my heart could take

If you just stay and take the pain away

 

And your little smile could go to the end of the world,

And I'd whisper your name if it was the end of the world,

..And I have writers block so I don't know what rhymes with 'end of the world',

But don't let me go even when you're someone else's girl

Cause you'll still always be this loser's world :')

 

.. And if I'm a stargazer mesmerised by the view,

Then I hope every constellation will add up to you.

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Written by
the-poetry-wizard
Published
Jan 7, 2015
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Notes

I had three days of writers block so I really don't think this is a good piece but it's still a poem isn't it.

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