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"understates" poems
Poetry with simple rhyme scheme isn't really poetry at all. It takes all the artistry of language, and crushes their greatness into something rather small. It belittles the sharp peaks of your smile, that peek through porcelain veils. It takes the beauty of your eyes, and brings them down to scale. The rhyming ruins all seriousness, true poets take in pride, it leaves their work in ridicule, though their emotions are implied. It vastly understates the warmth in your cheeks, and incredibly discounts the lions of your dreams, making them seem weak. That is why I will never write a poem describing the perfection of you in a silly little rhyme scheme; that is what I shall not do. I will, however, jest at what rhyming cannot describe, although it tries to do its best, it falls by the wayside, For limericks cannot contain my pretentious heart and soul, and cannot compare to the magnificence you hold. Because if I could contain your spirit, in matters of stanzas and rhyme my talents would be wasted, this atrocity a crime, But you make my writing worthwhile, and give me ideas to muse, instead of the dull and dread, the pretender's butter and bread, with none of my talents to use.
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Dec 19, 2013
Dec 19, 2013 at 10:24 PM UTC
Why Poetry Shouldn't Rhyme
By: Cedric McClester Twenty- seven years In a prison cell Like Dante’s Infernal A version of hell All he wanted was freedom For his native land Where because of apartheid Things had gotten out of hand This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing There on Robben Island Where he would be still If not for his courage And his indomitable will He led a movement That endured and prevailed Even from a prison cell Locked away in jail This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing To say he was transformative Understates the case A man for the ages would be better In its place He changed a people’s destiny Saw apartheid get erased As the father of his country His name has been encased This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing In 1964 an indictment was lodged Against Nelson Mandela Accused of sabotage Which he never denied Or tried to camouflage The truth of the matter is He was guilty by and large And locked away until he was discharged This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing Twenty- seven years In a prison cell Like Dante’s Infernal A version of hell All he wanted was freedom For his native land Where because of apartheid Things had gotten out of hand This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing (c) Copyright 2015, Cedric McClester, All rights reserved.
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Apr 21, 2015
Apr 21, 2015 at 4:51 PM UTC
A SONG FOR NELSON
By: Cedric McClester Twenty- seven years In a prison cell Like Dante’s Infernal A version of hell All he wanted was freedom For his native land Where because of apartheid Things had gotten out of hand This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing There on Robben Island Where he would be still If not for his courage And his indomitable will He led a movement That endured and prevailed Even from a prison cell Locked away in jail This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing To say he was transformative Understates the case A man for the ages would be better In its place He changed a people’s destiny Saw apartheid get erased As the father of his country His name has been encased This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing In 1964 an indictment was lodged Against Nelson Mandela Accused of sabotage Which he never denied Or tried to camouflage The truth of the matter is He was guilty by and large And locked away until he was discharged This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing Twenty- seven years In a prison cell Like Dante’s Infernal A version of hell All he wanted was freedom For his native land Where because of apartheid Things had gotten out of hand This is a song for Nelson Who changed everything A song for Nelson Is the song that I sing (c) Copyright 2015, Cedric McClester, All rights reserved.
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Hot Days, Cold Hands after much negotiation, the owners of our (her) west coast gran kids agree to a meeting in a neutral city a day of great joy, hugs kisses real life unlimited, playing pool catch, shark, (Ian is the ball) and splashing in Miami pool warmth and you don't think about poetry writing cause you are living it this morning two icy lumps, of coals wake me at 6:15 am, icy understates their arctic nature, my poor chest burnt by frost fingered nails message in a ten fingered bottle, freshly drawn from the cold Atlantic Thank you they say, and I reply, Let us move south to my warmer climes 6:47am
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May 3, 2014
May 3, 2014 at 6:50 AM UTC
Hot Days, Cold Hands
if it ever crosses your mind how i never wrote you letters how i haven’t written you into a poem please understand that there are things words cannot paint no combination of any phrasal collection will ever be enough to show the rest of the world what a masterpiece you truly are to prove my affection, such a connection is never enough words merely underwhelm the feeling, you understates your existence so i choose not to write until i realized until i learned that love is no art, no masterpiece it is not the way your ears turn red (when angry) not the accusations you throw at me for lying definitely not the kisses you give some other girl no, it is not and so for the first time, and not the last you are written you are in words you give me reason to write this my heart is not your canvas i am not your muse if it ever crosses your mind how this poem is not in your mail how you never read this please understand that there is no reason for me to be wasting exactly two hundred words for a boy who’s forgot how to love
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Jun 22, 2016
Jun 22, 2016 at 11:57 PM UTC
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