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"overanalysed" poems
our tram rides are loud words spilling out like loose rice scattered round our feet bright blue, silver, darkest black jackets soft and warm eye contact that lasts too long—- immediately overanalysed, I know. my wishful thinking, it often gets out of hand. walking in the dark, my hands are cold and lonely our eyes glance sideways too much, and yet too little.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 2:24 AM UTC
wishful thinking
on your birthday I wrote a letter comprised of all that I adored; words articulated in strikethroughs and barrelled with smiley faces to disguise my evident addiction to your smile --to your happiness. and although I value your happiness the letter remains at the bottom of my computer untouched, unsent because my heart is already shred to pieces, and the thought of you dismissing the words I poured myself in is unbearable. words; they never articulated properly although I pride myself a writer; I addressed situations I overanalysed over countless nights of lost sleep, where your mouth dropped, your eyes lowered your breath grew heavier after another brutal attack from my unaffectionate words. I noted little things; conflicts within yourself and wrote about them, my remedy a simple melody contrasting the bitter tunes spat at you, through widened eyes and curled lips. That letter is unsent because it exposes too much about how often I think dream feel about you. while I say very little
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Nov 25, 2014
Nov 25, 2014 at 5:11 AM UTC
bittersweet unsent letter