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Mackongo Sep 2019
I’m reclined in the chair,
For the very first time.
My anxiety at its peak.
It’s black and uncomfortable.
My arm resting on the side.
I begin to bite my cheek.
The equipment sitting there.
Standing by are the people,
Preparing for me, now all set.
I get brave and ready for the needle.

Clear tubes now red,
From my blood running through,
A strange, tingly sensation,
From my blood donation debut.
Racing to the pouch,
Or like a large silly straw,
With some sick beast enjoying
My blood at the end.

Alert at first,
Blinking tiredly soon after,
The room starts to spin.
My eyes playing tricks,
Is all that I could gather.

Suddenly falling,
But deep asleep.
The faces appear,
Absolutely appalling,
Dark orange and black,
Dripping and oozing,
But what flows from them?
My blood, perhaps.

Wait, why am I asleep?
I know I already wrote a short poem about passing out on here before, but I revisited the idea for my creative writing class. I like this better, I think
Echo Nov 2014
I passed out,
While running.
I blacked out,
While trying.
I fell to the ground,
While dying.
I was sent to the nurse,
While sighing,
I was given a serious look,
While taking my blood pressure.

"It's so low I'm not picking up anything."
While suffering,
My heart struggling,
My legs weak,
My heart burning,
My head ached,
My face was burning,
My fate was turning,
Low blood pressure happened to me?
While dying.
This really happened. It doesn't sound as severe as it was. Excuse me, as it is. It's not as bad (at all) as cancer but this is how I was meant to die. Everyone in my family has died of blood pressure issues. Joy. :/

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