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Nov 2014
There was a life
When I met you once
As I stood in embezzlement
My heart pounded fast
As fast as the storm tide (or) Like a storm tide

Our destined meeting
Has perfectly united us
We only talk about love (or) All we talk about is love
That sparkle and shine
When the sun shines

The sudden moon shined pale (or) The moon, It was pale
The sky, It was gloomy
When you left me paralyzed
You’re the victor of the show
In the end of applause (or) You’re the centre of applause

I’m leaving no thoughts alive
Down a memory lane
I’m taking my pain
My knees are burning hot
Like the fire of aching

I’m feeling tired and I’m so done
I will be gone by night
You could have stayed
But love is a battle
Between the Sun and Moon

I forgot how the promenade was
That only hell that it brings
Too much of heaven’s a sin
Stay away from me and fade
And tell me this is the end.
Orked Saerah
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Orked Saerah  Melaka, Malaysia
(Melaka, Malaysia)   
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