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Oct 2014
Row
ROw
ROW
Your boat
Cut you so deep
To make you scream,
Merrily
MERRily
MERRILY
mErRiLy
Your life is bleeding
Out slowly, this is not a dream.
Row
ROw
ROW
Your throat I will
CutΒ Β so deep, no longer will
You breathe
merrily
MERRily
MERRILY
mErRiLy
Your going to
Bleed,
Life,
Die,
And the last thing
You will see or hear is me
Singing you to sleep..
Didn't like how they worded or the structure so rewriting them
Poetic T
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Poetic T  On Oblivions Doorstep
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