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Sep 2014
Oh my God, can I have a word with you, my Lord?
This world of yours is full of woes and worries
People are busy with their hurries and flurries
Wondering, what was the meaning of your word(s)?

Oh my God, can I have a talk with you, my Lord?
No one cares about the society, just boasts about brotherhood
They have to comprehend that they should
Understand your teachings of the Gospel sort

Oh my God, can I have a request from you, my Lord?
You did what you should, now its our turn to hold
With the same love and affection as you have for the world
Give us faith in you, bless us with humanity, great lord


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My fifth original poem, dealing with the things that I would like to have shared with God. Great Lord follows a b b a rhyme scheme.
Akhil Bhadwal
Written by
Akhil Bhadwal  M/Shimla, India
(M/Shimla, India)   
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