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I Love You, Doll

They use to say I love you.

I hope no one ever hurts you.

They'd just met, but it was love.

Right?

Well the doll was never loved, but this had to be it.

She was happy.

Right?

She'd never felt happiness before though, so this had to be it.

She was a good doll.

Right?

She'd always try to help...

She wanted to wipe the tears of the hurt. She'd put them before her.

They were her best friend.

Right?

Or maybe that's just what she would tell herself...

Stop. Don’t question yourself!

She wanted to be good and happy and loved.

I just want to be happy

So even though something was wrong it was ok.

R i g h t ?

 

 

W r o n g .

Sometimes you can be used to much... ya know?

She still felt empty.

But that's normal, right?

She's a doll.

They don't have feelings.

Right?

Wrong.

She's cracking. Again. It's not working. This isn't happy. The twinkle in her eyes dimmed.

She is crumbling bit by bit.

I told you. Haha.

Reality hit her with a blow to the face

 

I LoVe YoU, Doll.

I hope no one ever hurts you.

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Written by
sahra-maxwell
American
Published
Jun 8, 2014
Lines·Words
34·201
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Tags
#love#sad#betrayal#hurt#wrong#and#right#doll
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