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Astronomical Love Triangle

Do you think it is the sun that loves the moon? shining shyly, seductively, enticing and craving its constant adoration and undivided attention? Or perhaps it is the moon that so desperately desires the sun? whilst in orbit, always hoping to catch a glimpse of its radiant beauty, enthralled by its passion, its strong and irresistible magnetic pull? I wonder if their love is challenged by the stars? striking, dazzling, beautiful, infinite onlookers, ever-watchful in the sky, twinkling dangerously, a flirtatious third party, competing with the sun or trying to outshine the moon? Despite their temptation, the stars fail to weaken or change the lovers, the moon and sun, and eventually fade into insignificance.
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holly-5
Published
Jun 7, 2014
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25·114
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random. extended metaphor for human love, with the stars representing interference/difficulties in a relationship

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#love#sun#moon#relationships#stars#astronomy#lovetriangle#teenagethoughts
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