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May 2014
hey
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we haven’t talked in a while
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weeks
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maybe even months, actually
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truth is, i can’t remember the last time we talked
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and, wow this going to sound crazy, but
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i saved our last conversation. i keep reading over it, trying to figure out where i went wrong
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but i can never find it
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i can never find that one place where i ******* up, where i said something wrong, where i did something to tear us apart, or make you hate me.
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and it *****, it really does.
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matter of fact, “*****” isn’t a strong enough word to describe how awful it is
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or how awful i feel
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hurt
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betrayed
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used
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and do you want to know what the worst part is?
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the worst part, aside from the fact that i can’t figure out where i went wrong, is that, even after all of this
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i still love you
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i have loved you, i love you now, and i’m pretty **** sure i will love you in the future.
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and i guess that’s half of what i came here to say.
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but it’s obvious that you don’t feel the same.
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and so i suppose that the other half of what i came here to say
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is goodbye.
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and though i’m sure that all your love for me has faded
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and that my name hasn’t slipped off your ******* long time
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all i ask of you is one thing
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just don’t forget me.
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okay so i've wanted to do a poem like this for a while now, and i absolutely love how it turned out. thoughts or feedback?
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