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LET’S DANCE IN THE RAIN (Pantoum)

My love, let us dance in the rain Let it wash our tears away Heal our wounds and clean our stain Make us feel better today Let it wash our tears away Let it help us forget our sorrow Make us feel better today Forget yesterday and think of tomorrow Let it help us forget our sorrow Every storm will surely end Forget yesterday and think of tomorrow Feel the raindrops that really mend Every storm will surely end The pain, the hurt, we’ll soon forget Feel the raindrops that really mend Just remember the goals we set The pain, the hurt, we’ll soon forget Heal our wounds and clean our stain Just remember the goals we set My love, let us dance in the rain.
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Written by
Marguerite
Published
May 11, 2014
Lines·Words
28·126
Notes

Pantoum

The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

The design is simple:

Line 1

Line 2

Line 3

Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)

Line 6

Line 7 (repeat of line 4)

Line 8

Continue with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending stanzathen repeats the second and fourth lines of the previous stanza (as its first and third lines), and also repeats the third line of the first stanza, as its second line, and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth. So the first line of the poem is also the last.

Last stanza:

Line 2 of previous stanza

Line 3 of first stanza

Line 4 of previous stanza

Line 1 of first stanza

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