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Feb 8
Lost At Sea (Pt 1) Revised
I'm drifting out to sea,
Where the storms brew,
At peace with the thunder,
Entranced by the view.
The lightning leads,
As my eyes fixate—
The violent storm
Communicates.
I can't hear your cries,
I can't feel your pain,
Blind to your attempts
To save me again.
The sea crashes,
I’m dragged from the shore,
Trapped and alone—
To fight this harsh war.
I'm lost in the storm
That silences your plea.
Don’t cry for me now…
This fight is in me.
By Darren Wall ©
Im not keen on my original poem. I've made changes in order to help it flow better.
#sea
#storm
#ptsd
#love
#water
#lost
#mentalhealth
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