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Opening Morning (a hunter's observations)

by piersonpflieger

Waiting    listening    watching - senses strain against the darkness. Dark gives way to gray enough to see deceptive shadows. The woods stir slowly. Chickadees speak, still sleepy. Leaves rustle in the distance alerting vigilant ears and eyes; inciting hope. Scanning the ridge and shooting lanes, my eyes - then ears - lock on rummaging squirrels.   Cold hands slip back into pockets; it tries to snow. Ravens complain        back        and        forth. Stillness - then the rise of wind through the trees. Around eleven I walk to Dad’s stand. Quiet talk and hot soup - no deer. The afternoon is spent, back against a Maple, with cautious thoughts comfortable enough to creep forward and linger in the peace of the woods.
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Mar 29, 2013
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This is a poem I wrote on my stand opening morning of deer hunting, two years ago.  Hunting is a family tradition I cherish.  I don't have to see any deer for it to be a successful hunt.  I enjoy sitting in the woods, an invisible observer, alone with my thoughts.  It's also the one opportunity I have to have some candid moments with my dad.

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