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From Park To Altar

by @salmabanu-hatim

My love, I saw you in the smile of the cheeky Sun, When we met in the park. I saw you in the glow of the charismatic moon, When you asked me out. I  saw you in the twinkle of the dazzling stars, When you kissed me with passion. I saw you in the lyrics of our favourite song when we had our first dance. I saw you  in the cocoon of a caterpillar, When you slept soundly beside me. I saw you in the huge waves of the ocean, When we made ecstatic  love, I saw you in the flutter of the butterfly wings, When you were agitated and worried. I saw you in the ferocious roar of the lion when you ranted in anger. I saw you in the tub of my favourite icecream, Which you did not share. I saw you in the halo of an angel, When you showed love and kindness to grandmother. I saw you in the sweet song of the lark when you mingled happily with  my family. I saw you as a complete packet, Someone I could spend my life with. I saw you in a four hearts diamond ring, When you proposed. Last I saw you in the marriage vows, Which you and I took. For better or worse.
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72 / F / Tanzania
Published
Jun 28, 2018
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#marriage#park#sun#moon#stars#ring
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