I cry myself to sleep night after night In seek for a better life One not so suborn and filled with love. I drowned in my tears every night Just like my ancestors have night after night One’s that were less fortunate to live the life I am living today. They would tell me to let things be At least you have a place to sleep and food to eat At least you have property you can own and an education you have grown. But this is America, Home of the Brave And if no one is going to be brave then it must be me Someone needs to say it, someone needs to speak it It’s not just for the black but for people who are different, People with disabilities and people who fall under diversity. We fight so many wars but yet we can’t tame the ones inside If it’s not my country then it’s certainly not yours We have to be bigger, we have to think greater Then someone’s gender and always remember Your religion is sacred and so is your history. Night after night a soul dies A life flies away into the unknown Hoping that the children they left behind Can have a better life then their own.
So I would really appreciate any feedback whether good or bad. I am currently adding this into my school contest paper in the category of poetry. It can only be this length as in no longer. But if any suggestion on word change or grammar/punctuation please do not hesitate.
This poem just kind of flowed out of me. And it's one of the realist pieces I have written in a long time.