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Love Note to Elpenor

God! Bring me down a trail of violets -

Bright violets for my love who drinks too much.

For we felt no fault in evenings spent dancing to old songs,

writhing, primordial dancers, our shadows burnt onto the rocks behind by fire

the air gliding around us like water in a stream.

We are heavy things. Our bones are filled with blood

and when we grasp eachother we rip the stems apart

And oily petals seep from underthings.

Dionysus!

Red, thick hot oily petals

Rose petals, broken from the bud

That weep for us, and die for us, as we lie

Clasped together like thorns

Elpenor!

Too late to continue our travels together

I will come back and bury you, I promise.

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Written by
Rosel
Published
Jun 22, 2017
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16·122
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#love#greek#ancient#classic#old#drink#alcohol#unusual#weird#relationship
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