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Unraveling

by shawn-d-smith

Please don't look for me I've hidden myself. I'm stuck in an endless void, there is no escape, surrounded by voices that won't let me out.. won't you tell what Ive done its the only way I'll be set free. I'm breaking down and shaking 'round in This world so helplessly But you just laugh and grin Completely blinded.. Nevermind What's the point now, I'm broken.. I try to stop my breath Even knowing the truth won't unravel Me until my death So breakable I am, unbreakable you are  I'm shaking but you are unshakable I'm fragile and you are not.. Now  The real you I've found and it has corrupted me. I stand alone in this world that keeps on changing But im hiding away, my true self is fading! I hope you give up There's nothing left to see... No,  I don't want you to look at me. I never wanted to hurt you, helping you was my only intent.. The guilt ways heavy on my conscious.. Sins I must have commit..so until the end I'm begging you, please, just to remember me... As clear as I used to be, before my heart and mind was broken... the time where you first met me. The loneliness that wraps around keeps deepening until I drown Fond memories we used to share pierce me 'til I no longer care I cannot run, I cannot hide, I cannot think, I cannot find I cannot move, I cannot leave you! I'm  Unravelling in this world. A change thats so illogical It shouldn't have been possible I'm left behind now a forgotten memory of a time once passed Before our fate and future starts tell me will we last?
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Written by
shawn-d-smith
Published
Feb 28, 2016
Time
2m
Notes

I'm guilty of falling in love...so I suffer.

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#love#depression#pain#loss#sorrow#fate#anguish
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