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Snizzlefish
Poems
Feb 2016
Adrift At Sea 2/5/16
Water.
Needed to survive.
Powerful enough to drown.
It can both quench & choke.
Often we suppress it in a comforting 16oz glass.
But sometimes,
Sometimes we find ourselves gasping to be released from the very thing that sustains us.
There's a certain irony to that.
To life.
Our control seeps out between our tight grasp like condensation; rings of unease stain our previously unmarred reality.
As if we have a hope of subduing something so elusive...
#metaphor
#lost
#water
#control
#perspective
#chaos
#losingcontrol
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