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Control

by @elisa-holly

Control, you say I lost it. Pulling against the chains that bind. My rebellion only proves my grit. Your constant scrutiny to remind I'm unfit. I stumble towards the north I struggle to find. Control, you say I lost it. You claw at my heels forcing me to submit. But, my mind refuses to be confined. My rebellion only proves my grit. I dust off my bruised knees as I hear you say "quit." Pushing to escape the role I have been assigned. Control, you say I lost it. Behavior, you no longer permit. The ties begin to unwind. My rebellion only proves my grit. Liberated, I reach happiness. Though you will never admit, You were blind by your own fears, which I now leave behind. Control, you say I lost it. My rebellion only proves my grit.
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May 14, 2015
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