I am but only a lowly feather Drifting through life, caught by the wind Searching for love That simple affection
I am but a dove Fragile and weak Softhearted, kind spirit One day it will be seen
I am but a swan Graceful and sweet I give it my all My every heart beat
I am but a hummingbird Large heart beats fast Looking for love To numb the pain of the past
He was but only a lonely human Drifting through life, caught by the lust Searching for games Girls to play
He was but a wolf Looking for sheep Preying on innocence Until he would bite too deep
He was but a bear Liked to eat Would ask them to cook So he could sleep
He was but a chameleon Blending in with each Making them feel safe Like the connection was deep
He was but a lion I was but a lamb I fell in love with the lion He fell in love with the lamb But he bit me And as I bled He couldn’t believe what he had did I confessed my love He didn’t walk away But after I died He found his new game
I need advice, constructive criticism, revisions, and help to perfect this poem. :)