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Eclipsed Time

They were something to behold

Everyone saw it

He pulled on her curls

She pushed him down

He laughed, amused

She frowned, but smiled when she turned around

He was a year her senior

Five and six when they met

During which, they were not the best of friends

He was more like a pest

She put up with

Over years though, it grew into something more

Akin to friendship

They would go out into fields

Chasing each other

Laughter filled the space

But then there were quiet moments

When breathing was caught

And looks were shared

And words were spoken

Some deep and buried

Brought out in the open

It was in those moments

Where things shift and change

Attraction became of them

As they grew in age

But neither acted in haste

Years of friendship prevented that

Still, gazes persisted; touches lingered

Talks became more intimate

They still laughed and teased the other

Both desired more though

But he was to leave for war

And not return, by any means, in a year’s or so time

One his last day before he left

They met

In a field

And she laid on his chest

He fiddled with her hair, pulling at her curls

Smiling when she punched his abdomen

When he pulled too hard

He would miss this

Miss her

She would miss him too

They soaked up the silence of night

Not talking just enjoying the sounds of the earth

He left at dawn

When he did, she would never tell a soul

How much she cried

 

He did not return in year or two or three

He returned four and half long years after

And he was not the same boy he was when he left

No, he was quite a different man

His eyes did not hold the same animation

They once did

His heart seemed hardened by his years at war

Guarded, more reserved

When he saw her for the first time

It was months after his return

In a crowded market

She was not a girl

No, not the girl he left

She was a woman

As much as he was a man

She did not see him at first

Her attention was elsewhere

He walked closer but stopped

A young girl about three emerged from behind the crate

Her fingers coated in something red and sticky

Which she was trying to clean

He could have sworn his heart stopped

And maybe it did

Because his breathing seemed to have ceased

The men around him became worried

His face ashen

Body rigid with tension

When she finally turned his way

Caught his gaze

Eye wide in surprise

In recognition…

He could feel her sigh

It seemed like the world stopped

People appeared frozen but moved with time

Passing in front of them

As two individuals allowed it to stop

But soon, he was recognized

They bowed and curtsied  

Saying meaningless pleasantries

It was not until

She walked up

Did he hear anyone  

The young girl on her hip

Face in the crook of her neck

Twirling her mother’s curls in her small hand

The woman—with perfect formality—

Curtsied and addressed,

“Your majesty.”

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Written by
leira
Published
Dec 30, 2014
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This was a fun one to write. I enjoyed it, and I hope you did too. Thanks for reading :)

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