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Requiem For Female Dignity

Upward-curled, gleam of white

But as yet, something missing

“I swear, I’m quite alright!”

My wonder turns to stressing.

Is she really quite alright?

 

No-one wears their shoes,

Socks upon the carpet

Browning fog turning loose,

But purple mist diffuses.

Is she really quite alright?

 

My wonder turns to worried health,

I turn my focus to myself,

I pull a beer down from the shelf,

Indulging still our failing health,

She smiles, as if to say that she’s alright.

 

Trading sweat between our hands,

A greeting shared from man to man

We speak ambition, WE ARE PROUD

Our cigarettes, they make no sound.

They know that it will soon be their turn.

 

To be or not… I have forgot.

Our wasteland, wasted, seems alright

It skips my mind I’m all I’ve got

I’ve never put up much a fight

I hope I’ll quickly be all right.

 

But there are NO PROMISES

And no safe-houses.

smoke arouses surety,

But holds the door for vanity.

But as for me,

I highly doubt she's feeling free.

 

Charging, useless, up the hill,

The last endeavor of it's kind,

Cry peace, peace, but peace is killed,

Fulfill the end of southern mind.

There is no way that she's okay.

 

As men in grey

Lay on the ground

Bleeding with untempered sound

I cast my eyes about the house

I find her broken, fading lips

Pressed limp against assailant’s kiss

 

Those pearls that were

Her sentient eyes,

They cast upon me smiling sighs

She clings the arm of shifty eyes

And leaves the party, new inside.

And now I know she’s not alright.

 

But then again, nor am I.

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Written by
ben-balserak
Published
Sep 30, 2014
Lines·Words
49·273
Notes

References to T.S. Elliot's "The Wasteland", The Civil War, and Shakespeare's "The Tempest"

Tags
#worry#sadness#party#purity#female#requiem#hopelessness#dignity#self-worth#balserak
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