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The Summer We Crashed The Car

by jeremyeckl

Well, not we But you alone delayed Those blurry red lines That poured from An officers light. He pulled you from the grave In the way You pulled those stones From the ground, Pillbugs and all, To call them boys And count their fingertips. Each had ten While you had twelve After the crash. The car wrapped around the sharpest Pole you could reach (The car wrapped around, Twisted like a cobra, With poisonous barbs ready at will) and spit you out towards the top. You slowly slid down Peg by peg, full with splinters, Then the officer came And let down his hair To weave into yours. After we went camping The forest swallowed you whole And the belly of the world Was swollen with guilt. After we went exploring You swallowed your tongue And your belly was swollen With rage and your Breasts with milk and metal. It was the wild (About which you had forgotten) Which drove you to madness And It was the madness That drove you to Crash the car Once before And though I hope otherwise We fear it will drive you To crash again. Well, not we But I still fear for you.
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Aug 15, 2014
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