I feel like I am diminishing I am shriveling up Not really dying Just a whisper Fading
I am a soft-spoken word Like an escaped secret Never able to return To your lips Not ever
Something seems off about this poem. I have been trying to wrap my head around it, but I can't. I think it is the ending, I want it to be powerful or give a different perspective to the poem. But I haven't found anything yet, so I have decided to stop thinking, and just post it.