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My Venus Torment

by ronald-ferreira

Crimson skies dwell above A caliginous passanger to her allurment, Her coarse body intertwined with the jagged thorns of a rose, reaching toward every vulnerable crevice. Yet she stands erect in her solitude, Her beauty only amplified by the scars left from years of desolation. She hides behind her labyrinth A deceitful shelter from the elements I journey through her path stumbling through the endless dark occasionally I find myself aching from the pain as though I can no longer Travel through her unblazed path. I only pray that one day I can Set my eyes upon her magnificient figure. To see past her concrete walls and hold my Venus torment in all her pain and suffering.
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May 15, 2014
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#love#pain#lost#sacrifice#suffering#complicated#truelove#theoneyoulove
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