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A Cliché Metaphor About Freckles and Stars

by goatedwiththesauce

That unforgiving metal. Within that unforgiving metal lies all the things you cannot forgive about yourself. Those freckles on your chin that you wish would expand into a constellation so that you may give them names and so that you may give them meaning, within that unforgiving metal. The Greeks threw their hands towards the heavens and deemed cosmic accidents worthy of the names of gods, although within them lie no gifts. Like a bedazzled and jaded Tiresias impostor one stumbles upon on their way home, who sees nothing but the tangible and tells all but the truth. Still, he is clad in diamonds and gold and thus has value in trade. Beauty triumphs over mendacity and mendacity over reality. But the freckles that mar your skin, that you cannot transfigure into the most meaningless of stars or the crudest of answers, sit there defiantly, waiting to be acknowledged and waiting to be named. You lean your forehead forward to rest against the cool smoothness of its idle twin. You could swear you saw her sneer at you. The freckles do not budge—they will consume you whole.
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Aug 20, 2021
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#mirror#reflection#freckles#stars#hellenism#beauty#reality#illusion#meaning
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