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sky

by icelar

the sky was blue birds that looked like strokes of black ink painted their way through the air, the golden sun glinting off of their inky brushstroke wings proud and defiant like a person who knows their mind i laid on the deck, face-up camera in hand trying to capture these fleeting beings of freedom only for the paint to drip too fast ending up blurred in the lens, but those golden glints, snapped and stored away forever
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icelar
17 / F / somewhere
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Written by
icelar
17 / F / somewhere
Published
Mar 9, 2021
Time
1m
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i was lying down on the deck when a bunch of birds starting soaring in the sky. it felt like freedom

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#bird#imagery#poem#freeform#freedom#camera#nature
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