this essence has been boiled down to the nearest nothing and deep down, it feels familiar—
a bird too grown to only now learn to fly, its wingtips creased the wrong way, nearly featherless, and weak. nowhere to go but down and even then, impact doesn't promise resolution.
a poem with too few metaphors, too much “telling”— we get the point but SHOW us— as if listless anger and sadness it's just a clear-cut visual, crystalline in memory against all odds.
this essence had been boiled down to the nearest nothing and deep down, it feels misunderstood.