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Feb 2020
I once had loved you
I thought you were the one
In the beginning we had so much fun
We went on dates
But I always paid
If I made the slightest mistake
You would become the embodiment of rage
You would tear me down
And make me cry
Because of you
I lost all of my pride
And for two whole years
I was dying inside
Until the day
I tried to end my life
But I survived
And came to see
That you weren’t worth it
So I decided to leave
Constructive criticism is highly appreciated.
Written by
Mariel B Restemayer  21/F/Boca Raton and St. Louis
(21/F/Boca Raton and St. Louis)   
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