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Dizzy on the Comedown

Maybe you said it once And breathed it quietly in my ear As we sat in your freezing car Parked in front of the library The roads were slick But you were slicker Handing out compliments like candy Maybe you said it a couple of times Over and over on the telephone As we both laughed into the receiver Me picturing your smile with every word The connection was weak But I was weaker Falling head first into you Maybe you said it a thousand times And held my face in your hands As we laid in that twin sized bed Your body pressed against my own The room was warm But you were warmer Moving for the first time in sync But maybe you never said it at all Or at least you never meant it As you said this was the last time Standing on the other side of the room The air was heavy But I felt heavier Fracturing me piece by piece
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thomezzz
28 / F / Wisconsin
For You?
Written by
thomezzz
28 / F / Wisconsin
Published
Jul 5, 2018
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#love#heartbreak#relationships
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