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Apr 2018
Our love was slow-roasting.
If we were chicken,
it would have fallen off the bone.

I can see now,
on this night
with it's moon as silky
as freshly laundered sheets,
that all I cared for was small.
And that my thinking them small
made them all the smaller.

There's no one to blame but me.
This, I now can see.
Feedback and notes for improvement are always appreciated! I'd like to fill in the middle, but I don't quite know how yet.
Jo Barber
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Jo Barber  22/F
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