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the waiter

*she dragged me out of the house

knowing i was feeling down

not allowing me to wallow

in my self pity,

 

she dressed me,

        painted my face

               fashioned my hair,

that’s my girl friend

 

at Juliana’s,

small family owned Italian restaurant,

a gem of a find, she said,

Lorenzo, greeted her with familiarity

(she leaves a memorable impression)

 

she introduced me as her bestie

with a twinkle in her eye

young (as all under 30 people are to me)

handsome, dark thick curly haired,

with dancing eyes,

a serving towel over his left arm

nodded with a genuine smile

 

i smiled back despite my mood

 

wine was swirled, smelled,

sampled and selected

a captivating performance,

executed expertly

 

she watched me

watching him

describe the specials  

with a melodic Italian accent

transforming my mood

 

garlic knots wafting with his stride,

placed on the table

with a small bowl of marinara sauce

still hovering

in his long lean fingers

it slipped,

splattering red stain

on the pristine white cloth

 

without skipping a beat

his eyes poured into mine

words emerged

“forgive me, your beauty made me nervous”*

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Written by
Cne
Published
Dec 6, 2017
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Notes

True story,

and yes I left a fat tip!

Best line ever

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#waiter#wine#italian#girlfriend#mood
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