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May 2017
they once told me...
Walking until nowhere to go,
keep going until you got so low,
don’t afraid that you gonna blow,
nothing would happen if you just go with the flow.

so I...
Trying hard, try my best to achieve,
trying so much that I missed so many sleep,
trying so much til’ people called me a working creep,
trying much, didn’t know I dug in too deep.

while I...
Giving all my thoughts and my fits,
didn’t realize me and my luck has split,
thinking I should have realized since I was a kid,
that how hard is it to take a hit.

but...
I’m too tired and too exhausted,
feeling like hanging by loosing thread,
feeling like I am just good as the dead,
and right now all I do is blaming on my faith.
so this is my first poem to be put out here, sorry for any mistake here...
   so I wrote this poem when I was having a hard time during my admission exam, that time I was so blue and didn't have anyone to talk to and then while listening to Eminem's songs, the thought came up that even others had hard time in their lives too and they have many ways to express how they feel so why don't I try something and I did! so there will be more poem out here soon :D Thank you for reading all this til' here.    -seychellessch-
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