Shall I compare thee to a summers day? I think not, for the day's end soon approaches as does Summer's demise. Shall I compare them to a sparkling diamond? Again, I think not, for many diamonds are cut apart to gain their beauty. Shall I compare thee to a crescendo of song, reaching its peak? Still, I think not, for each and every note may yet still go sour. While some may profess these things as perfection, you are indeed perfection in my eyes. Now and forever.
Not sure how I feel with it overall, I mean I like it, but it could be better.