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alignment (The Theory of Poetic Relativity)

Forest inquires:

 

How do you decide, choose your design, find its guise,

give it a face, surrender to the poem's own

vanity,

        and choose the poem's alignment?

 

 

                                                  an answer forms:

 

this alignment idea,

you think it simple,

everybody understands

what your inquiry means

 

alignment -  the appropriate relative position

 

we live in relative position to each other, our poems too, for they are but written synapses of our close captioned interactions, seemingly random, but assuredly not, as we invest in ourselves, seeking the mysterious appropriate answer

                                                                                        from the Theory of Poetic Relativity

 

                                                                i love your question;                              hold it to my nostrils,          

                                                          smell the coffee aroma wake up blast inherent;

                                                                      

 kiss its robust childlike cheeks for the simple   soulfulness essential arousal;

for you see sir you have found

the appropriate position that relates us, our mindful words;

 

                                 answer no good, wholly insufficient?

                                        perfect.

                          as i close this quick cooked to perfection laboratory solution, take note

 

                              

                                                    the earth has moved

                                our hearts have beaten a measly thousand times

                                    time and space have appropriated our prior

                                          

relativity

 

when you return years hence this poem's shape will perforce have moved. for words are weathered flux constant and yet inherently unchanged except for the part of us that changes with every re-reading  

 

and what was

 

 

right before has left and the center has moved again

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Written by
nat-lipstadt
99 / M / NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Published
Mar 12, 2017
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28·220
Notes

Nat,

This is probably just an insane thing of mine, but I cannot stand the center aligned formatted poetry. I want to read the poetry, but why center? I want to know why it is center aligned? If it is a metaphor for how poetry could/should serve as a balancing point, a countervailing force for a point, perhaps I could understand...but so many poems center aligned, I don't know, I am probably missing something.

A right aligned poem? Perhaps I could understand, if the content was asking me to revolt, to revolutionize, to counter the status quo. But a centered poem? What does the alignment mean?

anyway, it has been a long time since I've been around, keep writing, hope you are well.

-forest

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