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salted caramel

you said i was exotic, and i said ooo what do you mean? exotic like a fruit?, like i don’t know what tropics you think i came from, was imported from, but you read my skin like the label on a flavour of coca-cola you had never been offered before and i was refreshing, and different. and you liked the way my coke-bottle curves felt beneath your fingertips, said you’d never tasted caramel like me before, you said i was exotic. like i was a work of west african art, even though my mother’s from the east, like i was from a storybook like 1001 african nights, like, you saw my cover and you were hooked, never did think to look beneath the jacket, just wanted stories like the ones scheherazade sold, i was your sheba and you my solomon. we rode lions across the sands, your kiss was salt on my lips, i needed to quench my thirst and you offered me the brand new flavour of coca-cola. you said i was exotic, like a pretty foreign thing, some mail-order thing, special delivery just for you, a flavour of coca-cola that you had never tasted before.
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belbere
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belbere
Published
Nov 19, 2016
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it's not a compliment

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#love#life#art#race#fetish#africa#foreign#exotic#cocacola#ethnicity
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