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Mar 2016
man
man, she used to hold me
like a hurt child,
and tell me that everything
would be so okay,

man, she loved me so far,
and when my darkest,
she took my heart away
with a single kiss of her mouth

man, she punched my pain
and make me feel flowers,
like I was in love
of her beautiful smile

man, she is still everything,
I don't want to let her go
or make her unhappy,
not anymore, not that

but, dude, she is flying,
and I was just some weight
she kept carrying
without making any sense
hm, I guess this is based on "'Tis a Pity She Was a *****", by David Bowie
Gabriel Roa
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Gabriel Roa  Barquisimeto - Venezuela.
(Barquisimeto - Venezuela.)   
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