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horseloversmyth
Poems
Oct 2015
Why Day Goes
Node poem here: http://www.spicynodes.org/a/7d2bb6e5228c163e0f558105ee877522
Nodes:
set up on the nice spongy ground
a ring of stones where a fire goes
strawberries all around
but they are quite now
just as the fire went
when the wind blew
they coat the ground
but their fruit is asleep
deep in their green
an idea in their genes
still none of this
is why day goes
Playing with a non-ordered form. Try to keep the phrases short and open-ended, and open-beginninged, so that each line can be attached to any of the others. Sense the sense in the shift of order.
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