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Bulletin

I knew you wanted out

So I gave you the gun

And told you to shoot.

Your hand was shaking

So I held it and pressed it

Tightly against my chest.

Do it!

I closed my eyes

And so had you.

It was empty.

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Written by

arturo-hernandez

Mexican

Published: Sep 24, 2015
LinesWords: 1044

Notes: You had someone else do it for you.

Pew.
Tags: #gun #empty #voice #sound #shot #wound #trigger #pew

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