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Mar 2015
Please, if you would, take notice
that I take notice of the notes,
thus one may wish to notice
my use of the note field,
for, I've noticed,
many seem to use it differently
or not at all,
but I can't help noticing
that I have a kind of counter-dialogue with my notes
almost as if it provides some context that's worth noting.

Lemme know if you notice.
I'd be interested to take note.
I know some of you sure do.
Don't worry: I've noticed.

;)
..raw..

What's up with this "..raw.." stuff?
Why are you getting all deep about this?
Where is this going?
What the hell?
Are you joking?
Are you ever not joking?
HELLO!?
ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?!

HELLO?! HEEELLOOOOO?!
Do you even care?

Yes, actually, I do, and
thank you for noticing!
The defense rests.
Anubis the Philosomancer
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