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feelings and things

the obvious tragedy torment me torment me light rain to torrent puddle to sea it lines up so perfectly these are just some lines in place of those I'd rather have led up my nose or is it lead? oh well, who knows there's sun draping the flowers that grow that is what should be the focus now, those flowers literally let it resound they reach pretty finger into the ground embrace the earth let it resound the goal is to rise far above, the putrid petty pushes and shoves a pitying glance from the woman you love your pride, starved for romance, worn like a glove it's reachable in some context, though those roads aren't illuminated yet but they lay still tread-able and you have able step light your own way illuminate yet it's hard to convey the meaning, of this whole mess feelings and things I myself don't know what good it brings this whole mess feelings and things
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Written by
ej-aghassi
33 / M / American
For You?
Written by
ej-aghassi
33 / M / American
Published
Feb 17, 2015
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52·161
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drunk among other things

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#poetry#drunk#life#lonely#thoughts#things#other#among#neorealism
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