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Spring - A Collab with the Princess in Pink

The spring in your steps

And the spring in nature

Playing a match

That let me have a catch

Of a bit of happiness

In all my loneliness

 

In all my loneliness

This weather makes me

Light as a feather

Dreaming of us together

 

Dreaming of us together

In a fairyland

We claim as ours

Where a vast meadow

Filled with flowers

Dancing as the wind blows

 

Dancing as the wind blows

Taking away my woes

Sun rays kissing our skin

Let the light shine upon us

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Written by
gitacharya-vedala-1
Indian
Published
Feb 9, 2015
Lines·Words
20·87
Notes

After reading her poem about cherry blossoms and the brilliant imagery, I was awestruck.

Today I got the opportunity to work with one of the gifted young poets of Hello Poetry, Blythe (I love her description, 'princess in pink'. An imaginative and fairytale look at the life).

Unsurprisingly, she carried the spirit of one of my better poems in a brilliant way and lifted it a notch.

I thank Her Royal Highness Blythe for this wonderful collaboration ;-)

© GitacharYa VedaLa

http://hellopoetry.com/gitacharya-vedala-1/

© blythe

http://hellopoetry.com/blythe/

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