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Loser

a crunch a wet thud & then the slap of skin against pavement broken cartilage fractured bones a valley opens a dam bursts thick black blood pools on the cement

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Published: Feb 4, 2015
LinesWords: 730

Tags: #fight #blood #sensual #fighting #thriller #vivid #sensory #pavement #cement #onomatopoeia

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