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justanotherfool Aug 2016
Hey, You seem so happy!
You're laughing loud as you can be,
Over a bottle whiskey,
With a hand full of LSD,
Blood in every sneeze, dragging on your knees,
yet you scream, 'Living in my Dreams'

Hey, You seem so pleased
as you see the dead in the seas,
as you spit fire to see, the kids crying 'please'.
You drink their blood with ices, hail the flag of ISIS
And you claim that it's your sacrifices,
huh, and that too for Jesus!

Hey, you seem so satisfied,
With yourself tied to your pride,
Living in this bright side, away from the war side,
Thanks to that divide, see that smile on your child
Huh, you think you're fortified, you think you're purified,
so you put the god aside, as you're satisfied.

I just hope you'll all find time,
to find on the other side,
your keys to paradise.
Help me with the grammar, please. And help me to identify the weaklings
justanotherfool Aug 2016
Fell Down
Cried Loud
Helping Hand
I Pulled Up
She Pulled Down
Fell Down
Foot, Shoulders
She Went Out
I Laid Down
Cried Loud
No Helping Hand
justanotherfool Aug 2016
Huh, Get me out of this race, I am too tired to chase
and can no more outpace, all these rats in this place.

God, I'm running out of dates, running out of grace
and now there's a war in my brains, I can longer face.

These were my thoughts of those days, thoughts of that phase
a phase with all the haze, huh, really my dog days.

You eve' had a thousand days, stuck in a maze,
and all the people say, you are a ******, buttface!

Oh, you know, all those Sundays, and your pastor takes
a bible to praise, and shoves on your face, with a freaking verse.

Sorry, It's time I replace, a 'God' that brings disgrace.
It's time I erase, the 'you' in my brains, without leaving a trace.

No please God, Why don't you come out of space, to this base
and do what it takes, to make this g'**** world amaze!

Oh my Lord, It's too cruel to stay, with all your plays,
in that space, when your race is in search of a brace.

Lord, Just open the gates, get us out of these straits,
to a whole new place, Father, with all your grace.

Lord, just in case, if you can't deal with our mistakes,
just bury us in your rage, but please don't leave us in these Hades.
The first few parts are obviously from my journal. After listening to the song-'Oh Lord' by 'NF', I was inspired to make a song of my journal. So this is it. I need your help to improve this one. Especially, I failed to find a connecting link for the first and and second half of this song.
justanotherfool Aug 2016
Do you remember what I'd told
That getting over you is my only goal
But forgive me today for playing foul
Now getting over what I'd told is my only goal.
justanotherfool Aug 2016
Oh Lord,
you know what this is all about
yet no word from your throat.
Is it that I'm so deaf!
Or is it that I'm all dead!

No No May be you're just indifferent.
May be you think I'm so irrelevant.

huh, okay, I know, I am no president,
May be not that elegant and a little bit arrogant
but still my lord, my tongue was so eloquent
I know, it reached your ears, my cries of all these years.
So may be I ain't the one who's deaf, and
may be it's you who is dead.

Forgive me, my Lord, for being this raring
Don't push me down again for this daring
It's just that, huh, it's too much.
I am so trapped in his clutch.

Lord, Why are you so indignant!
Is it because of me being so languish
for your touch that is so delinquent?
Hey, Don't you hear me, the mighty father, am I speaking Spanish!!

May be I'm the fool, coz' I believed you
I believed that you were the break through
May be it's time I do a review,
may be a search for some other Kings too
People say, that they are all tried and true!

No Oh no, You are my only master, my Lord
Ah, I just can't believe that I tried to switch this board.
He made me believe that I am ignored.
Forgive me, Lord, as I'd fallen into his hole.

All I wanted was a name, a name with all the fame
as I was so tired of all their blames.
So I set it in my brain, set it as my aim.
lord, it was all part of his ****** game.

All my worries were on this life, and I gave in myself to the butcher-knife
wanted to be renowned in this city,
never saw that I'm being an unknown in the holy city.
Now I see, as all my worries were of this life,
I should be of all the men to be pitied,
I should've remembered the crucifixion and your resurrection,
No objection, it's time I make that correction
to lead a life as your reflection.
1 Corinthians 15:19 If only for this life we have hope in Christ, we are of all people most to be pitied.

The initial part of this song/write up is actually from my journal written a few years back. I know that it is not up to the mark of any poetic or literature standards. Reproducing that part from my journal itself made me full of guilt. Bt anyway, those times in my life were so real. I won't deny the fact that I was s cynical then on my Lord.
justanotherfool Aug 2016
I've been walking this same road,
Never had a moment to feel some proud.
I have no problem in saying that loud,
Joe, You can no more control this shroud,'
'It was the wrong King you ever bowed, for the past Six years'

'Huh, I've not heard of any other King,
and never kissed any of those 'Saints'' ring.
It was Jesus on whom I relied to bring,
a bit of peace of mind when I'm not winning.'
'Ei, It never ringed in the ears of your king, for the past Six years'

'Hm, That's why you're stuck in this road,
and it seems like you have not at all grown.
It was you the one who, fell for that crone,
buried the lord once you smelled her cologne.'
'Joe, It was my King who wept all this time, for the past Six years'

'Now It's time you get out of that road,
All you need to do is to seek for 'the God',
give him that confession you owed.
Ask 'the spirit' to guide you to decode,
all the words of the God, veiled from you for the past Six years'
For the contest https://allpoetry.com/poem/add?item[for_contest_id]=2671524
Though I wrote it for the contest, I was completely being honest about it.
All  I wanted was to finish with 1 Corinthians 15:19, But Somehow I lost track to it. May be you can help me.
justanotherfool Aug 2016
No, I am not another witch, though it's been sometime since I got ditched
Once I was a peach, that's the same thing that made me bewitched.
All I ever hated was to be in these skies, My only dream was to be in that grounds
I thought it was the real heaven, I should've asked my Lord for an expound.
Today I stepped my foot on the floors, just to get sold in pounds for pounds.

No, this ain't any fiction, My Dear, it's the story of my eviction,
for my misapprehension of 'the crucifixion.'
Lord, please help me to get these wings stitched,
Lord, please help me to make my mind all cleansed,
As I now know that you would come, when this moon turns 'blood red'
125 words- For the contest-Image Prompt-http://www.cuded.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Robert-Dowling_4600_446.jpg
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