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 Jun 2015 TT
Mallory Davis
Naked
 Jun 2015 TT
Mallory Davis
If he shall fall from my arms
Like the leaves of a tree
And blow with the wind
Under another’s shade
I will be left in the open
Wondering if the season
Of loneliness has come again
As it always has when
The winters are cold

Come spring I feel
I will not
Have the strength to bud again
 Jun 2015 TT
Susie kate
we measure the smile on our face by the width of our pocket
we tell ourselves "if only I had this" I would truly be happy
we spend our lives wanting more
more possessions
more materials
more tangents
to Hell with that
I want less
call me the crazy one, but I want life
more experiences
more love
more beauty
more nature
spending your life trying to reach a goal that is implausible will lead you to a life of unhappiness
but spending your life wanting to live, that will lead to a life of passion
 Jun 2015 TT
Matt
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