Some may say:
It is missing something!
Indeed, some have said:
This is incomplete!
Look:
these stones lay
gray with lifelessness
gray as the clouds gathering
over his graphite city
such oddity of geometry
peculiar buildings with
perpendicular lines
raising parallel paradigms
and the unpainted sun
casts awkward shadows
across the gray stones -
empty sidewalks -
devoid of colours
devoid of life
devoid of people
Yes, where are the people?
but to critique my art