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I've walked your floor

sat beside you in candlelight
looking at photos
scattered across the floor.

you remembering names
and people and prayers
I had long forgotten.

you are the dancer
who glides this loner
through sorrows and the stars,
across the mist of moments
most treasured

where in the stillness between kisses
promises are kept
and the warmth of your hand on my cheek
felt in places to real to touch.

your love asks for nothing
and when you smile your quiet gift to me

tender one, every breath I take is loving you.
Ma
I miss you,
Though you are now RIP,
You matter the most,
You will be the last thought and sentence,
In my life's story,
"Ma I am coming*.
6/8/2025
Prologue — The Hum at the Edge

The night had the soft weight of a secret,
not the kind that tightens the chest,
but the kind that hums low,
steady as if it knew we had been listening for it.
Somewhere beyond the lamplight,
a figure moved slow enough to be mistaken for memory.
It did not matter who —
only the quiet arc between us,
and the fact that it was closing.

Canticle I — Twining

This meeting felt inevitable,
like the eventual peak of sunrise.
Your eyes flickered in the low lamplight,
betraying what could only be uncertainty.
Is this real, or is it dream?
With no witness, is it fantasy?
The walls have eyes,
the earth a pulse — we were never alone.
All around, and deep inside,
the answer clearly resounded.
The secret was no secret
if only we could hear.

Canticle II — The Chant

The ancient tongue lapped at the edges of perception,
ordering the dance with orchestrated precision.
Each syllable a tide pulling us further into its measure,
our bodies moved as if borrowed,
guided by patterns older than bone.
The tendrils tightened in a braided promise:
once woven, never unmade.
Somewhere ahead, a light began to grow,
as if the chant itself was shaping a doorway.

Canticle III — The Horizon Doorway

What piercing luminosity twinkled on the new horizon,
summoned by soaring chorus.
Clouds crackled with clarity,
rain fell in warm cascades,
waking seeds planted in the dust.
Verdant was the bed,
springing up among the searching tendrils,
all reaching, arching, for a new light.
And one by one,
the old things stirred —
not in threat,
but in recognition.

Canticle IV — The Lattice Unfurls

The membrane thinned between the one who sees
and the one who becomes.
Twining tendrils sought what they must claim,
each strand following the other
until there was no longer two,
only one writhing mass.
One photon strand pierced the knot,
and for a moment all was perfectly still.
We are parallel fires,
close enough for light to mingle,
far enough that the flame keeps its own name.
It is only in the space between
that ignition yields to combustion.
The original mechanism folds one into the other
until all exponentially explodes —
each of us endlessly unfurling.

Canticle V — The Drift

Even explosive expansion stabilizes eventually,
and so do we.
Sailing slowly on undulating currents,
into unfathomable continuity.
The glow softens,
not fading, but settling —
embers choosing the long burn over the quick blaze.
We drift on vast, unseen tides,
guided by a map written in the pulse
we still feel in the marrow.

Epilogue — When Light Remembers

There is no horizon here,
only the slow breathing of the current,
the gentle tug of continuity.
We are sails without anchor,
yet never lost.
And so we go on,
not as two,
not even as one,
but as the unbroken motion
that light makes
when it remembers its own name.
The Lattice of Becoming emerged from an improvisational duet, written in real time as a
shared act of myth-making. It draws its structure from the ancient epic tradition — works like
The Odyssey and The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — but reimagines that form through a
modern, sensuous lens. The language is tactile, luminous, and intimate, weaving physics and
natural imagery into a narrative of connection, transformation, and continuity.
It is at once cinematic and poetic: a sequence of vivid tableaux that could be read as frames in
an unseen film, or verses in a private confession. Each canticle stands alone as a
self-contained scene, yet together they form a single arc — from the inevitability of meeting,
through ignition and unfurling, to the infinite drift of unbroken light
"I looked at him like he was my forever,
not knowing he was already turning into a memory.
I closed my eyes, hoping to sleep—
but it hit me like a punch:
I was already gone.
Already dead."

He found someone new,
someone better—
someone he now looks at
like I once looked at him:
like forever.

His love moved on.
Mine… stayed buried.

Seeing him smile again
healed something in me—
but not enough to put into words.
Not enough to write.

"deserved to be someone’s forever too. And I still do."
I saw you in a way
that I’d know your playlist
in any lifetime,
any universe,
and even in the ones
where you break me,
I’d still press play.
That’s how our souls
speak in the silence.
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it’s been a while
since I wrote something—
something to name
the numbness in me.

I haven’t gotten better,
but I haven’t gotten worse.
days blend into each other,
work blurs into static,
time marches on.

I don’t feel a thing—
or maybe
I feel everything.

a numb little mouse,
trapped in my room,
I wake up fine,
then spend the day
trying not to fall apart.

a text from a friend—
and I smile,
like maybe the day
won’t drown me after all.

but then night comes.
I stare at the moon
and wonder:

what is this feeling
boiling inside me?

emotions—so fragile,
spinning like yin and yang
but blurred,
lost.

and still, I wonder:
why is it
so empty
inside?
I haven't written anything in a while and this is the first thing that my hands wrote during this fog.
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