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Mark Toney Jan 2020
500 Error
Mark Toney
Jan 2020
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
will fix it asap."
Excuse me, but what's your
Definition of asap?
As slow as possible?
My HePo adventure begain
With great expectations
Each day I try to upload
My profile and cover photos
Again and again and again. . .
Always getting the 500 Error—
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Excuse me, but what's your
Definition of asap?
As slow as possible?
If you're not going to fix
The process for uploading pics
Then why don't you just
Be straightforward and honest?
I think I'll try to upload again!
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Ad infinitum
Ad nauseam
Since I've become a HePoet
Each day you also ask for donations
"You look good today.
Why not donate?"
Each and every day
Over and over and over. . .
Well at least you say
"You look good today"
I think I'll try to upload again!
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Ad infinitum
Ad nauseam
Oh, here's the donate blurb again—
"You look good today.
Why not donate?"
Well, I'm glad you asked!
My response is as follows—
"Uh oh, I encountered an error
Making a donation for you.
I've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
That is, as soon as my
Photos are uploaded
But I won't hold my breath. . .
Don't hold yours either. . .
Otherwise, I like your site
Please get it right
Please
© 2020 by Mark Toney. All rights reserved.
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
will fix it asap."
Excuse me, but what's your
Definition of asap?
As slow as possible?
My HePo adventure begain
With great expectations
Each day I try to upload
My profile and cover photos
Again and again and again. . .
Always getting the 500 Error—
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Excuse me, but what's your
Definition of asap?
As slow as possible?
If you're not going to fix
The process for uploading pics
Then why don't you just
Be straightforward and honest?
I think I'll try to upload again!
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Ad infinitum
Ad nauseam
Since I've become a HePoet
Each day you also ask for donations
"You look good today.
Why not donate?"
Each and every day
Over and over and over. . .
Well at least you say
"You look good today"
I think I'll try to upload again!
"Uh oh, we encountered an error
Making this page for you.
We've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
Really? Imagine that!
Ad infinitum
Ad nauseam
Oh, here's the donate blurb again—
"You look good today.
Why not donate?"
Well, I'm glad you asked!
My response is as follows—
"Uh oh, I encountered an error
Making a donation for you.
I've been notified and
Will fix it asap."
That is, as soon as my
Photos are uploaded
But I won't hold my breath. . .
Don't hold yours either. . .
Otherwise, I like your site
Please get it right
Please
© 2020 by Mark Toney. All rights reserved.
01/01/2020 - Poetry form: Free Verse - Copyright © Mark Toney | Year Posted 2020
Not-So-Superman
Feb 2014
May yosi at may asap
Blankong tingin at sipat
Salamin na pang loko
Kulang sa balbas pa no.
Nag aaral ka pa ba
ang tinanong niya sa
Isang batang maliit
Oo po, sagot ng paslit
Parang karaniwan lang
Kung hindi natuluyan
__
Cigarettes and clouds
Blank stares on looking
A fake mirror and guise
Given away by a lack of ****** hair.
"Do you still study"
He asked
The small boy
"Yeah", said the young one.
As if it were normal
Should he say no.
Blankong tingin at sipat
Salamin na pang loko
Kulang sa balbas pa no.
Nag aaral ka pa ba
ang tinanong niya sa
Isang batang maliit
Oo po, sagot ng paslit
Parang karaniwan lang
Kung hindi natuluyan
__
Cigarettes and clouds
Blank stares on looking
A fake mirror and guise
Given away by a lack of ****** hair.
"Do you still study"
He asked
The small boy
"Yeah", said the young one.
As if it were normal
Should he say no.
The poem was written in Tagalog! The native language of the Philippines! If you like it do please attempt to understand it in the original! Its much better!